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Starr COLLEGE ESSAY The novel, The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald influenced my view of myself. The story was about a wealthy man named Gatsby and his attempt to gain his true love. His loves name was Daisy. She had married while Gatsby was away at war. She only loved for convenience and wanted security and wealth. The novel changed me because it showed how Gatsby tried to win the love and admiration of his peers through his wealth. He gained his riches all in hopes of winning Daisy back. No one really cared for him but they pretended to in order to use him. When things started going down hill for him, no one was there for Gatsby. The love of his life returned to her naturally rich husband and life of submissive luxury. Gatsby was later killed by a jealous husband who mistook Gatsby for his wifes lover and killer. The novel showed me that I had to access my actions and find out what purpose they had. At the time I was just geared towards making a fast dollar. It happened so fast and money was so easy to get I never appreciated it. I took it for granted. It (the money) began to wear thin and so did my friends. I realized I had to change my goals and enjoy life while I am still able to. My realization came about after reading the story. Gatsby and I were alike in some ways. He disregarded his actions for the end result. He didnt think about the way he obtained his money. Gatsby only thought about what purpose it served, to get Daisy. He and I had to realize that if someone doesnt want you when you have nothing then their love will amount to nothing. The difference between us is, I realized my fault and changed it. Gatsby continued on his self-destructive path. |
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Perseverance in my Life by Amina Alliyu Throughout my life, I have been faced with many obstacles and challenges. By having perseverance, I was able to overcome most of them. I was able to get into the first High School of my choice, get good grades in my math class, and obtain an internship in the field of law. All of these which have gained my interest and made me a stronger person in life. When I was applying to High School, I was so determined to go to Murry Bergtraum. I wished and prayed that I would get accepted and unfortunately, I didnt. I was so upset and I couldnt understand why I didnt get accepted. I met all of their requirements so there was no reason for them not to accept me. By having perseverance, I decided to look for other means of getting into this school. I wrote a letter to the Board of Education stating that I had met all of the requirements of this school and I really wanted to go there. The Board of Education decided to look more into this matter, and they granted me a special admission into this school. I was so happy that I didnt give up, and was able to get into the school of my choice. In my junior year of High School, I wasnt doing to well in my math class. I was getting low grades on my test exams and I was on the verge of failing. My math teacher told me that I had only little hope left and the only way for me to pass the class was if I pass the Regents Exam(Citywide Test) with a 65 or above. I wasnt going to give up that easily, so I had made up my mind that I was going to pass this class no matter what it takes. I bought tons of math software and I got a tutor to help me after school. By having perseverance, I was able to pass the Regents Exam with an 84 and pass my math class. Over the summer, I was looking for an internship that was geared toward the career I wanted to study, law. I really wanted to get a job geared towards law so I can get a feel of what it is like being a lawyer and working in a law firm. I went to several interviews at law firms and was unsuccessful of seeking an internship. I was very disappointed but was able to face the fact. By the time I went back to school, my guidance counselor told me about an internship at Chase. At first I wasnt really interested because I felt that Chase was geared more towards finances but she talked me into it, and I gave it a try. It was very competitive internship that was only given to 26 students so I really had to try to do my best. I went to the interview and I explained to the interviewer that I really would like to be placed in a legal department if they had one. He told me that he would do his best to place me at my first choice of desire. The interview went very well, and in two days I got the job. Not only at Chase, but in the legal department of Chase. By having perseverance, I was able to gain an internship at one of the citys top companies and learn more about the career I wanted to study. By these experiences, I have learned never to give up in what I really want out of life. I have proven to myself and others that I am ready to face any challenge that comes my way. These challenges have made me a stronger person and has made me to believe that you can do anything you want once you put your mind to it. As I move on to the next level in my life, I plan to be a overcomer as well as a leader at what ever I do. With perseverance, I can overcome anything and achieve my goals in life. |
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College Essay by Johathan Bonet
I am currently a senior at Murry Bergtraum High School for Business Careers and my major
is Legal Studies. I am also in the Tech Prep Program that is affiliated with the
Fashion Institute of Technology (F.I.T.). My average is an 85 and I am doing pretty
well in my classes. My interests are computers and video games. I really like
computers and want to be a computer engineer or electronics engineer. I really want
to get into computers because I think that they are fascinating and in the future they are
going to be the main way in which people communicate with one another. The best
thing about computers is the Internet, because it makes communication between people
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If
you inherited millions of dollars that could only be used to support charitable works,
what good deeds would you fund and why? |
| COLLEGE ESSAY by Johanna Rodriguez Have you ever heard of that saying that goes; you learn from experiences? Well, I ;personally believe that this is quite true. As time goes by and you experience situations that might have been bad or good at the time, But you could always remember what to do and what not to do. I am an 18 year old girl that has had her share of experiences but I always learn something from them. When I was in junior high school, which I consider those years the most difficult years in my teenage life. Junior high school kids are very vulnerable. They are at a stage when its cool to fit in. To be in the in crowd. Well we have all been through those years and unfortunately, my junior high school years were not my greatest. I lived in a small apartment with my mother and little sister. Obviously only one income was coming into our home. My mother did not have enough money to fill up our closet with clothes. In school people use to make fun of me and my appearance. They thought that I was ugly and stupid. I use to cry myself to sleep sometimes because of all the nasty remarks the other kids use to call me. I was a very timid and quite girl who would let all those kids insult me and I would do nothing about the matter. I have changed dramatically since then and I am not friends with any of those annoying kids who made my life a living nightmare. I go to the same high school as many of them now, but ironically the shoe is in the other foot now. I have an infinite amount of friends who appreciate me look for me whenever they need a friend or advice. When I see those kids in the hallways, I walk right by them.Thanks to God my family is financially stable and I work as well so I am able to support myself with certain things that I need for school and for myself as well. My physical appearance has changed a great deal, and I have a steady partner who loves me and never puts me down. Its hard for me to remember the last time I ever felt alone. My friends never give me the chance to even think about how badly I was treated once. I have learned that during time, you can make anything happen. You should never let people put you down, if anything you should use that as a reason to prove them wrong and become a better person and has the ability to make anything possible. Realizing that there are many cruel and insecure people out there that, feel it's funny and cool to make fun of others has made me come to this conclusion. You are who you are, never try to prove yourself to everyone because you will never accomplish that. :Prove to yourself that you are indeed a great human being and that you are proud of who you are. This will then make you better than those who did not think so and that makes you a beautiful person. |
| Karla Lopez COLLEGE ESSAY Ever since I was a little girl I had a good idea as to what I wanted to do in the future. I knew my career would be Business related, thats why I made the important decision to go on to Murry Bergtraum High School for Business Careers. In this high school I learned and acquired many skills that I will take on to college and to the workplace. I also got a broad understanding of the Business atmosphere and that has lead me on to develop many goals and aspirations for myself. As the dedicated student that I am, I hold on to educational goals firmly. My first one is to successfully complete my four years of college with honors, maintaining an excellent average. From there on I wish to continue and get a masters. Throughout this process I hope to absorb knowledge that will be useful to me in my field. I want my college degree to be worth a lot. This way I will be proud of myself for my wonderful accomplishments. A degree will also enable me to hold a job in a prestigious business firm. My educational goals are very significant to me. It is very important to me that I accomplish them. My future depends on if I do this and how I do this. Without an education I cant accomplish any of my other goals. That is my main concern as of right now. What I do today will affect what I am tomorrow. Therefore I will strive to obtain a college education that will open up doors for me and allow me to demonstrate all my capabilities in the corporate world. The college of insurance will help me reach my goals by giving me its enriching education. It is well equipped with teachers and curriculum that provides a solid base in insurance and risk management concepts. Not only will its academic standards enrich my knowledge its Cooperative Educational Program will prepare me to take on real business world situations. All that it has to offer is sufficiently capable to prepare me for a career in Insurance or Risk Management. I believe its staff filled with expertise and professionalism will guide me wisely throughout my College years. As far as I can remembered I have always been a good and dedicated student. Always willing to learn and always trying to perform to the full extent of my capability. I have been able to keep my average besides the fact that I have taken several challenging course. As a sophomore in high school I had the honor of taking an advanced placement course in U.S. History. This course helped has prepared me for college with its degree of difficulty. I have a good feel of college level work and how to deal with. I know what to expect and whats expected from me. As a junior I also took pre-calculus which was a great challenge for me. Ive been on the honor role numerous times and was a member of the honor society as a freshman. I also took part as member of the math team and Conflict Mediation. Not only was a active in school but I also engaged in some community service at precinct 109 in Flushing Queens. I received an certificate of Appreciation for outstanding services from The Mitchell-Linden Civic Association. I know that I am capable and willing to prosper as a student of The College of Insurance. This college has many outstanding qualities. Its prestige and education quality is one of them. Another aspect that makes it attractive is the Cooperative Program which offers valuable experiences in corporate who provide an array of well-paying career-related jobs. These internships are valuable because they enable students to make professional contacts which usually lead to full-time positions in your field. I know this college has a lot of wonderful things to offer. Those are my many reasons for my attending this college is crucial and will leave me with a life time experience. |
| College Essay by Mellisa Esponda Ever since I was a little girl, I think around the age of 5, I always used to think about what I wanted to be when I grew up or "when I be big," as I used to say. Up until the 6th grade, I think, I believed that being a teacher was what I wanted to do. I remember getting all my stuffed animals and forcing my cousins to sit around in a circle. We would do the Pledge of Allegiance, then sing a class song Id make up, and then I would give them some work and write on a black board. Later on, I realized that teaching was not what I wanted to really get into. I guess that after exploring the other choices that I have in life, I decided that I would like to be in a more challenging and interesting field of work. This is when I thought of getting into law. I feel that I have the drive, the determination, and I am capable of handling pressure. On top of all that, I also just feel I always have to be right. I started to read up on the responsibilities of District Attorneys, para-legals, and lawyers. All of the information I discovered really drew me in and helped me in making my decision much easier and faster. I also enjoy watching all of the detective and lawyer TV shows, as well as books on the subject. Immersing myself in these dramas is like being an actual lawyer, because I have to figure out who did the crimes like a real lawyer and detective. I guess thats because mystery really catches my attention and challenges me. Now that I figured out what I wanted to be I was set. Well, until I realized another thing; there are so many kinds of law. Theres real estate, corporate and criminal law, among dozens of others. Well, after boggling my mind for a while, my final decision took place. With some thought and a lot of research, I decided corporate law is my calling. I dont think I would want to be a real-estate lawyer because that seems to be plain out boring. Criminal law is really interesting, but I dont think I could really deal with the fact that I might be defending someone guilty or put an innocent person in jail. I wouldnt be able to face living with this on my mind. This is why I chose corporate law, it may sound like the easy way out, but there is a lot of work that needs to be done in the business world. This is something I discovered after four years of studying business law in Murry Bergtraum High School. The more I think about college, the more I look forward to my future. And I have to start preparing myself because just yesterday, I could have sworn I was with my stuffed animals and cousins, 3 ½ feet tall, and teaching them the ABCs. Who knows? Maybe tomorrow Ill be winning my first case. |